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the Stranger in the moonlig...
2008-01-10
ch 2,
abuseThis is very intriguing. I like the idea of Darkness, Dawn, Hope and Aggression all walking among each other trying to find Peace. And yet striving for Confusion and Disarray.

~the Stranger in the moonlight
simpleplan13
2007-12-07
ch 2,
abuseThis whole idea for the poem is awesome... the personification i amazing... I like how you make the creation of black holes... and involve hope and aggression.. its great
simpleplan13
2007-12-07
ch 1,
abuseI like the personification a lot
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