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| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2008-01-10 ch 2, | abuseThis is very intriguing. I like the idea of Darkness, Dawn, Hope and Aggression all walking among each other trying to find Peace. And yet striving for Confusion and Disarray. ~the Stranger in the moonlight |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-07 ch 2, | abuseThis whole idea for the poem is awesome... the personification i amazing... I like how you make the creation of black holes... and involve hope and aggression.. its great |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseI like the personification a lot |