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readyforpeace 2007-12-09 ch 1,	abuseI like this a lot. There is such a wide spectrum of pain condensed into it. I like how short it is, it makes it sound packed with despair. I especially like the lines that are in italics. Its a very well written way to convey your message.
smile for the sunshine 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abuseThis is simple and short but nice. I kinda like it although I think that you could have made it longer. But it was still very nice Katrina. = )