Excellent. So hopeless and procrastinating, really wonderful.

the Stranger in the moonlight

Your writing is so beautiful..it just captures the interest of the reader and makes them feel, not just know, your message in this poem. I really liked how 'In times like this some say today' sounded in the second line.

I like how darkly abstract this is, yet it is still relatable and feels very real.

This is just...beautiful. I can picture everything perfectly in my head.

So glad you're back!

Rowan.

It's really beautiful. I can really see a girl laying down in the grass and looking at the sun. Great job.

-C.N

Good poem, it's good to see you posting again.

SirScott

Absolutely beautiful. The words were so rich and elegant in a way. The imagery was great and I could picture pale girl standing outside in the sun, kissing the air.

Great job.

-Sapphire

Thank you so much for your great review, I really appreciate it and I am glad that you enjoyed reading my new poem!