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| Mari Grem 2008-02-01 ch 1,  | abuseThis was absolutely beautiful. I've always been in love with redemption as a central theme and this is just beautiful. Although I must admit the liquor burning like her eyes is what cut me. Just amazing. |
| painting andromeda 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is a work of art. Meticulously crafted, raw real, genuine. I usually only read poetry but this was an exception. Phenomenal. Forever & always, Stephen |
| DXM Junkie 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseSo elegent... god, this was wonderful. "You wore your cancer well." I love that line. On to my favorites this goes... |
| Amy F. 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, you never cease to disappoint me. There is always so much passion in your writing. I love it. |
| yv 2007-12-12 ch 1, anon. | abusebeautiful.. |
| cocaine and cherries 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abusei have chills. ohlord. |
| cynth ballerina 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseThat was the most amazing piece ever. The detail, the specific parts you emphasized, the parts you didn't... everything was so fantastic. I want to read it over and over again. Because I love not understanding it, but understanding so much. |
| Aimee Raven 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseHey there! I haven't reviewed anything of yours in so long...I'm afraid I've gotten a bit lazy and ficpress is finally boring me but...this is utterly fantastic! I *love* it, I love how long it is, I love the whole mystery of it, it's like...I can see this as a brillant movie scene, it's simply perfect. I hate these reviews that just praise and don't say a single intelligent thing but there's nothing to say...it's wonderful! It really stays with the reader..."I wanted to see your mouth twist and your arms strain. I wanted you to know what helpless felt like." I love that, it is absolutely sick and so intense...wonderful. So many emotions, so beautifully conveyed. Perfect! Love, Mia |
| creepy kiss on tuesday 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I love prose pieces like this, it's an addiction really. Imagery you never forget, imagery that comes up everytime you see it in real life. I'll never look at smokers the same way again. |