That was AMAZING! I had the chills while reading that, it was so dark and beautiful.

I especially felt the chills when I read this "I wasn't attracted to you because you were beautiful. I was attracted to you because you were dangerous." and some of your other lines. Exceptional work, really.

I just recently posted 2 stories and I would love honest feedback and suggestions from a talented author like you!

thats incredible.

dark and bittersweet and beautiful. i love it.

i might be good at writing, but right now i'm left speechless

This was absolutely beautiful.
I've always been in love with redemption as a central theme and this is just beautiful.
Although I must admit the liquor burning like her eyes is what cut me.
Just amazing.

This is a work of art. Meticulously crafted, raw real, genuine. I usually only read poetry but this was an exception. Phenomenal.

Forever & always,
Stephen

So elegent... god, this was wonderful. "You wore your cancer well." I love that line. On to my favorites this goes...

Wow, you never cease to disappoint me. There is always so much passion in your writing. I love it.

beautiful..

i have chills. ohlord.

That was the most amazing piece ever. The detail, the specific parts you emphasized, the parts you didn't... everything was so fantastic.
I want to read it over and over again.
Because I love not understanding it, but understanding so much.

Hey there! I haven't reviewed anything of yours in so long...I'm afraid I've gotten a bit lazy and ficpress is finally boring me but...this is utterly fantastic! I *love* it, I love how long it is, I love the whole mystery of it, it's like...I can see this as a brillant movie scene, it's simply perfect. I hate these reviews that just praise and don't say a single intelligent thing but there's nothing to say...it's wonderful! It really stays with the reader..."I wanted to see your mouth twist and your arms strain. I wanted you to know what helpless felt like." I love that, it is absolutely sick and so intense...wonderful. So many emotions, so beautifully conveyed. Perfect! Love, Mia

Beautiful. I love prose pieces like this, it's an addiction really. Imagery you never forget, imagery that comes up everytime you see it in real life. I'll never look at smokers the same way again.