Reviews for Twelve Dancing Nobles

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fragmented blue 2008-08-05 ch 17,	abuseSo, I will try to answer all of your questions, so this review won't just be "I really loved it because it was amazing!" 8D 1. Favorite pairing/character: Um. I think my favorite pairing is Deva and Deu, because they have to work things out, and they're a bit snarly at each other. I also like Toi and Trii, because they're... pretty sexy, and of course, I like the threesome. So I guess that's my three favorite pairings. XD 2. Cleverest part of the whole story/thing you remember best: I liked the mentions of Puss in Boots! If that's what the fairytale is called. It's also really clever how you wove all the stories together, and turned the twelve princesses into a curse. 3. What color curtians will Windra make Odeen install in the throne room? Er. Green! XD 4. If it hadn't been a threesome, who would've gotten Cheaste? I don't know, because I love threesomes. 5. Tell me everything that was wrong with the story, be it 'you're gramer sux0r' or 'it could have used more descriptions at times' or 'your plot seemed to drag on, and your characters were underdeveloped': I think you could have developed Quentin and Cheaste's relationship more before they story ended. Not that I didn't like them as a couple. :) Last thing: this is amazing! And unfortunately, I don't have an answer for number six. XD
Catseye*Rose 2008-08-02 ch 17,	abuseI loved this XD A lot. So many of my favourite fairytales...glee! Oh, questions to answer? Well, that's always fun! I shall do this in an organized fashion! :D 1) Well, I really love Ceice/Quentin/Cheaste...maybe because they were the most focused on? But they were seriously adorable XD Trii and Toi amuse me, just cause they basically pounced on each other :P But really, I loved all of them! 2) Leaving Ceice's wing was pretty clever, I think. It wasn't all "yay, everything's perfect!", which was nice...and, y'know, Windra didn't get to finish his shirt. Although maybe if she hadn't made Uun's so long... 3) Definitely not green, since she had to look at those nettles for so long. Maybe multi-coloured! 4) Ceice. He would've poisoned Quentin in his sleep, hidden his body in the invisibility cloak, and dumped him in the lake, then told Cheaste he merely went off to find more adventure. :D 5) The only thing I could see was the spelling of the French numbers, but maybe that was on purpose? I liked the alternate spellings XD 6) No idea! The pouncing on each other thing's already been used... 7) You are amazing. :P Kudos, if you survived this review XD (I had way too much fun writing it!) So, um...yes! Loved the story! Every wee bit of it! It was just so cute XD And I see you've written a number of other things, so...yeah, this isn't the last you'll hear of me ^^ insert evil laugh
i-see-faeries 2008-06-07 ch 17,	abuseSo I'm totally in love with this story. :D I personally love Trii and Toi, but Chetery and Kat are my second favorites. I totally love the last chapter, with different point of views. Actually, I don't like Quentin, I don't know, he annoys me? Haha. But most important, I love you! So if you ever thihnk of more, please write. :D
Aime Atem 2008-04-22 ch 17,	abuse1) Favorite pairing/character: Troi/Tri (sorry, but remembering the actual numbers is easier...) 2) Cleverest part of the whole story/thing you remember best: I love how you manipulated the fairy tales. "Twelve Dancing Princesses" has always been a favorite. 3) What color curtians will Windra make Odeen install in the throne room? Rainbow, to show their acceptance of the princes' relationships...? 4) If it hadn't been a threesome, who would've gotten Cheaste? Quentin. 5) Tell me everything that was wrong with the story, be it 'you're gramer sux0r' or 'it could have used more descriptions at times' or 'your plot seemed to drag on, and your characters were underdeveloped': Not enough...argh, I don't know how to explain it. You didn't get inside the character's heads subtly enough. 6) Since I still have no good ideas for it: how should Piat and Saynk end up together? I promise to laugh at... I mean, seriously consider every option. Strawberries! I suppose that's more of a prompt, but thar ya go. 7) Anything else wot needs to be said. Like, for example, how amazing I am. You are so amazing, you put strawberries to shame. Thank you for the questions! They were fun, much like your story.
Blithe Lee 2008-04-21 ch 17,	abuseHmm, I think I'll go with number seven: OMG, you are, like, teh awesomeness! With that said...I think I probably like Deva and Deu the best. Just because it's not necessarily a "happily ever after" for them, and it's not as easy an ending for them as for the others. Cute. And I say Ciece would have gotten Cheaste. Because Quentin would probably be able to rebound and end up with someone nice anyway.
Blithe Lee 2008-04-21 ch 5,	abuseUm, whooa. So Odeen is the king with the six sons? Much unexpected. Oh well. I guess not all the heroes can be princes, right? Though next it may be found that the six daughters of one of the kings were all turned to boys and peasants under a spell. ;)
Blithe Lee 2008-04-21 ch 4,	abuseYou know, if this were a het story, I'd so totally expect Quentin and Windra to end up together. As it is, I do expect them to meet--and for them to hit it off, since they seem compatible. Hmm, can't wait for what happens next. And yay, my guess was right! :) And, of course, this fairytale is The White Stag. Though I totally do not remember what it was actually about.
Blithe Lee 2008-04-21 ch 3,	abusexD How creative--I'm guessing their names are the French for numbers one through six? (I'm rather proud of myself for this, as I never even took French and all I can do is count to ten.) And I'll also guess that, when the six brothers are interrupting her in the story, they're talking about the OTHER six brothers (three on an inheritance trial, hm). That King sounds like a wily old fellow.
Blithe Lee 2008-04-21 ch 1,	abuseWindra's amazing. So, so far I have "Twelve Dancing Princesses" and..um, that one about the step-mother (as always) and swan brothers, and seven shirts the girl must make out of needles? Or something. Perhaps. I'm curious to see how many other fairytales I can I.D.
loveroffairytales 2008-04-08 ch 17, anon.	abuseI really don't like the boy with boy that you did the story was good but that ruined it
Shiyuri 2008-03-24 ch 17,	abuse1) Favorite pairing/character: Chetery and Kat. I'd like to fancy that Chetery is quite a flirtatious guy, and Kat happens to be just the master of flirting. LOL They'd be fun together. 2) Cleverest part of the whole story/thing you remember best. You gave the fairy princes significant roles in this story. Clever. In the original fairytale, the princes were just... mere props. 3) What color curtians will Windra make Odeen install in the throne room? Black and red? LOL I know you sometimes used words as "shy" and "unsure" and whatnot to describe her, but I'd like to imagine her as a... hardcore queen. One that rules with her tender whip. evil laugh Otherwise, I think she'd like blue or green. :D 4) If it hadn't been a threesome, who would've gotten Cheaste? Ceice of course. Who else? 'O' The threesome is nice; it provides variety. I don't mind threesome. At all. grins 5) Tell me everything that was wrong with the story, be it 'you're gramer sux0r' or 'it could have used more descriptions at times' or 'your plot seemed to drag on, and your characters were underdeveloped' Well, I think you should've included more interaction between the fairy princes and Windra. They know she doesn't possess a malicious aura / magic and all, but I think it takes a deeper relationship for them to truly worry, hurt, and weep for her like that. 6) Since I still have no good ideas for it: how should Piat and Saynk end up together? I promise to laugh at... I mean, seriously consider every option. Hmm, Piat seems to lack manners right? How about Saynk is an uptight prince who excels at etiquette? He's been prodding Piat with manners ever since he was still a swan, and Piat finds it endearingly annoying... or annoyingly endearing... Okay I'm sure what I'm talking about. >.> 7) Anything else wot needs to be said. Like, for example, how amazing I am. This is really nice. ^__^ I like slash fairytales and now I think crossover slash fairytales are my new fav. Great job!!
Mistress of Apple Pie 2008-03-21 ch 17,	abuseYet another fantastic story written by you =) Well to answer your random questions as a gift along side with this review; so here it goes: 1) It would have to be Toi and Trii...I'm not quite sure why, but it just is. =P 2) I would have to say the cleaverest thing would have to be the invisible cloak...it's such a big part of the story, I think it deserves a happy ending (just kidding.) But I really do think that the gift by the king did make the story roll. 3) First color that comes to mind: red. =D 4) Hmm it's hard to choose, but if I have to, I'd say Quentin. I do feel bad that his family just went all out in saying "yeah, you have the walking-stick, now leave!" with the exception of one brother. 5) I thought maybe not all the characters were fully developed, but at the same time, I find it enough information to know how a character would react. I'm really not that sure, I didn't think that it's nearly as bad as I thought it might have been. 6) They don't end up together. Oh, I'm just a humorous gal...hmm, not really. I wouldn't really know, in fact, I'm pretty much not alive while reading and enjoying this story that...maybe I did forget that there was one extra pair left to tie? Sorry, I'm pretty much the Walking Dead during the afternoon and only creative during the morning, how's that for weird? >.> 7) You. Are. Absolutely. Amazing. It's true though, you have a great sense of humor :D
Seque Me ad Meum Somnium 2008-03-04 ch 17,	abuseI really enjoyed this story though it was so incredibly interwoven. I'm not a big fan of threesome romances, but it was okay because i don't know who else would have fixed that. I wish I had known more about the farm boy and his cat, though. That sounded interesting.
x-princessa-temnoti-x 2008-02-16 ch 16,	abuseHave I reviewed for this chapter? I think it always baffles me a little...the concept of a threesome. But oh well. Who cares if I get it or not, they're still cute...
x-princessa-temnoti-x 2008-02-02 ch 17,	abuseOh, yeah, sure...you're absolutely awesome beyond comprehension that it is beyond my comprehension how I can even speak of it. ...Why are they so cute?! That's a good thing! Blame Envy. Not the FMA one. Cuz Edward's cuter. Yeah.

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