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| Gen Eliz 2008-01-22 ch 1,  | abuseI really like this, because I can so relate to smiling in a picture while not really smiling inside. well done! |
| daughterofmusic 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseOnce again: painfully true. I love how you managed to capture the exact emotions of it in just a few words. Keep writing - Music |
| Ardie 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseshort and sweet i love it and i think the title pictuer perfect serves it well |
| never-written 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseAh yes, I remember reading this one... ..so good. There's so much that you get across with 7 simple lines. |
| thegirlisgonenow 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseI like the rhyme thing too. |
| diametric 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseWhat the camera doesn't see Are the desperate souls of you and me. Wee. Saved the poem with those two lines. very Noice. |
| End-of-forever 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abusehuh. You're saying something really interesting with this. I like it...short and sweet. :) |
| PsychoCola 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseConcise, yet veracious! |