I enjoyed your poem it was short but makes you think. I don't like poems too long unless there good. Anyway great poem so... umm...
Peace.
P.S. could you tell me what you think of my poem?

m... it feels like a storm in my brain. so powerful! your emoptions slip through the spaces between every word perfectly. amazing! really lovely. simple. short. and beautiful.

happy holidays!

Creating a Dream

Nicely picturesque, and pleasing to read. There doesn't seem to be a meaning, but I get a vibe off of it, a mood.
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Dx