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| simpleplan13 2007-12-13 ch 1,   | i think we all have a monster inside... love how u describe it.. I also like the formatting |
| lordelfy 2007-12-10 ch 1, | This is really kind of random but in the end everything makes sense! I like it, unique! |
| Possessed Pencil 2007-12-10 ch 1, | Very nice point, i liked this poem very much.:) |
| SilverTwilight 2007-12-07 ch 1, | *opens gate* Be free, little thing! Just kidding, I shouldn't make fun. I think the format you used is very effective, and your sentence structure is strong for this poem. What an original way to demonstrate your message. Good job! ~ Dx |
| angel1357 2007-12-07 ch 1, | confusing. very much so, though partially your fault with your email coming in the middle. i'll go reread it.. no more confusion! Luckily. So now since you reviewed MY work I'll go get started on writing ch1. |