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Reviews For: The New and Improved Annie Bananie - Reviews: Page 1 of 23

letseatsomecake
2008-06-15
ch 3,
abuseoh my gosh!
when i read the part where the noodle went down the wrong tube i cracked up
tthis is really good
katiemoon
2008-06-05
ch 21,
abuseu REALLY! need to write an epilouge to this its really good and super sweet. i think an epilouge would be better closure to the story (and im not just sayin that because i want more of this story although tahts a MAJOR bonus)
Cherrii-Pie
2008-06-03
ch 21,
abuseI have seven words to discribe your story...
Amazing!
Gentle. Edge.
2008-05-31
ch 21,
abuseThe whole story was a bit rushed but I thought it was pretty good. If it was more paced, the story would have been better but it definitely wasn't horrible. Nice job :)
Gentle. Edge.
2008-05-30
ch 1,
abuseWhen people just jump into a story, it makes it seem incomplete but the way you did it made it seem natural. You really showed the characters and I liked it. How old is Anna anyways? You never really said (or are you going to? o.O).
texaslonghornfn
2008-05-25
ch 21,
abuseSuh-wet action.

Loved it! The ending was fine, don't worry about it.

=]]
Mystery girl90
2008-05-23
ch 21,
abuseNice story it's very dramatic=))
Marisa Gittinger
2008-05-18
ch 21,
abuseAW! I thought that was an EXCELLENT ending. Vague endings are better because it gives you hope. I loved this story so much, but now I'm kinda of releaved it's over, but only because it was such a good ending and now we have no more ups and downs to go through. :)

New story soon?

~Marisa~
midnightbeauty
2008-05-17
ch 21,
abuseOmg.. best ending :D I love Dodger and now Annie again too, now that she got her head straight!! :) It's cool that even though you had a happy ending, it was also realistic. I loved it! So, are you doing an epilogue? ^.^
Kisses,
midnightbeauty
cherrystraw
2008-05-17
ch 21,
abuseomg!
i loved this story!
keep writing stories!
DOMOxKUN
2008-05-16
ch 21,
abuseOMG >_< Sequel? :D
crazychic7278
2008-05-16
ch 21,
abuseits over, i totally shouldnt have known it was going to be over, great story by the way again, still i love chaysing eliot still...
Crazy Bitch
2008-05-16
ch 21,
abuseAw. Before I read the 'the end' part I was thinking you would write and tell about how the sleep overs went, and stuff. D:
Well, It was a good ending. c:
Jayjack
2008-05-16
ch 21,
abuseugh you SUCK! i wish i got out of school Wednesday. but no i have less than a month. Grr

a little rushed yeah. but it was good. and blunt.
the big crunch
2008-05-16
ch 21,
abusethe end? really? i didn't seem like the story went on that long. :)

great story, per usual. :)
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