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| letseatsomecake 2008-06-15 ch 3,  | abuseoh my gosh! when i read the part where the noodle went down the wrong tube i cracked up tthis is really good |
| katiemoon 2008-06-05 ch 21, | abuseu REALLY! need to write an epilouge to this its really good and super sweet. i think an epilouge would be better closure to the story (and im not just sayin that because i want more of this story although tahts a MAJOR bonus) |
| Cherrii-Pie 2008-06-03 ch 21, | abuseI have seven words to discribe your story... Amazing! |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-05-31 ch 21, | abuseThe whole story was a bit rushed but I thought it was pretty good. If it was more paced, the story would have been better but it definitely wasn't horrible. Nice job :) |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseWhen people just jump into a story, it makes it seem incomplete but the way you did it made it seem natural. You really showed the characters and I liked it. How old is Anna anyways? You never really said (or are you going to? o.O). |
| texaslonghornfn 2008-05-25 ch 21, | abuseSuh-wet action. Loved it! The ending was fine, don't worry about it. =]] |
| Mystery girl90 2008-05-23 ch 21, | abuseNice story it's very dramatic=)) |
| Marisa Gittinger 2008-05-18 ch 21, | abuseAW! I thought that was an EXCELLENT ending. Vague endings are better because it gives you hope. I loved this story so much, but now I'm kinda of releaved it's over, but only because it was such a good ending and now we have no more ups and downs to go through. :) New story soon? ~Marisa~ |
| midnightbeauty 2008-05-17 ch 21, | abuseOmg.. best ending :D I love Dodger and now Annie again too, now that she got her head straight!! :) It's cool that even though you had a happy ending, it was also realistic. I loved it! So, are you doing an epilogue? ^.^ Kisses, midnightbeauty |
| cherrystraw 2008-05-17 ch 21, | abuseomg! i loved this story! keep writing stories! |
| DOMOxKUN 2008-05-16 ch 21, | abuseOMG >_< Sequel? :D |
| crazychic7278 2008-05-16 ch 21, | abuseits over, i totally shouldnt have known it was going to be over, great story by the way again, still i love chaysing eliot still... |
| Crazy Bitch 2008-05-16 ch 21, | abuseAw. Before I read the 'the end' part I was thinking you would write and tell about how the sleep overs went, and stuff. D: Well, It was a good ending. c: |
| Jayjack 2008-05-16 ch 21, | abuseugh you SUCK! i wish i got out of school Wednesday. but no i have less than a month. Grr a little rushed yeah. but it was good. and blunt. |
| the big crunch 2008-05-16 ch 21, | abusethe end? really? i didn't seem like the story went on that long. :) great story, per usual. :) |