 AJ southern 2009-09-19 . chapter 11drama filled. |
 DeeDee219956 2009-05-12 . chapter 21This story was awesome! Can you beleive that I read the entire thing in a day? |
 3DarkGoddess3 2009-01-29 . chapter 21The ending was really sweet. But man did they have a lot of problems getting there. I still really liked it.Glad there was a happily ever after. |
 letseatsomecake 2008-06-15 . chapter 3oh my gosh!
when i read the part where the noodle went down the wrong tube i cracked up
tthis is really good |
 katiemoon 2008-06-05 . chapter 21u REALLY! need to write an epilouge to this its really good and super sweet. i think an epilouge would be better closure to the story (and im not just sayin that because i want more of this story although tahts a MAJOR bonus) |
 Cherrii-Pie 2008-06-03 . chapter 21I have seven words to discribe your story...
Amazing! |
 Gentle. Edge. 2008-05-31 . chapter 21The whole story was a bit rushed but I thought it was pretty good. If it was more paced, the story would have been better but it definitely wasn't horrible. Nice job :) |
 Gentle. Edge. 2008-05-30 . chapter 1When people just jump into a story, it makes it seem incomplete but the way you did it made it seem natural. You really showed the characters and I liked it. How old is Anna anyways? You never really said (or are you going to? o.O). |
 texaslonghornfn 2008-05-25 . chapter 21Suh-wet action.
Loved it! The ending was fine, don't worry about it.
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 Mystery girl90 2008-05-23 . chapter 21Nice story it's very dramatic=)) |
 Marisa Gittinger 2008-05-18 . chapter 21AW! I thought that was an EXCELLENT ending. Vague endings are better because it gives you hope. I loved this story so much, but now I'm kinda of releaved it's over, but only because it was such a good ending and now we have no more ups and downs to go through. :)
New story soon?
~Marisa~ |
 midnightbeauty 2008-05-17 . chapter 21Omg.. best ending :D I love Dodger and now Annie again too, now that she got her head straight!! :) It's cool that even though you had a happy ending, it was also realistic. I loved it! So, are you doing an epilogue? ^.^
Kisses,
midnightbeauty |
 cherrystraw 2008-05-17 . chapter 21omg!
i loved this story!
keep writing stories! |
 DOMOxKUN 2008-05-16 . chapter 21OMG >_< Sequel? :D |
 crazychic7278 2008-05-16 . chapter 21its over, i totally shouldnt have known it was going to be over, great story by the way again, still i love chaysing eliot still... |