drama filled.

This story was awesome! Can you beleive that I read the entire thing in a day?

The ending was really sweet. But man did they have a lot of problems getting there. I still really liked it.Glad there was a happily ever after.

oh my gosh!
when i read the part where the noodle went down the wrong tube i cracked up
tthis is really good

u REALLY! need to write an epilouge to this its really good and super sweet. i think an epilouge would be better closure to the story (and im not just sayin that because i want more of this story although tahts a MAJOR bonus)

I have seven words to discribe your story...
Amazing!

The whole story was a bit rushed but I thought it was pretty good. If it was more paced, the story would have been better but it definitely wasn't horrible. Nice job :)

When people just jump into a story, it makes it seem incomplete but the way you did it made it seem natural. You really showed the characters and I liked it. How old is Anna anyways? You never really said (or are you going to? o.O).

Suh-wet action.

Loved it! The ending was fine, don't worry about it.

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Nice story it's very dramatic=))

AW! I thought that was an EXCELLENT ending. Vague endings are better because it gives you hope. I loved this story so much, but now I'm kinda of releaved it's over, but only because it was such a good ending and now we have no more ups and downs to go through. :)

New story soon?

~Marisa~

Omg.. best ending :D I love Dodger and now Annie again too, now that she got her head straight!! :) It's cool that even though you had a happy ending, it was also realistic. I loved it! So, are you doing an epilogue? ^.^
Kisses,
midnightbeauty

omg!
i loved this story!
keep writing stories!

OMG >_< Sequel? :D

its over, i totally shouldnt have known it was going to be over, great story by the way again, still i love chaysing eliot still...