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| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseThe last line is always the question that wants to be asked but hardly anyone does. Love the poem. I'm so glad its in my C2. Keep writing. XKristie MarieX |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem, sweet structure of your rhymes, nicely written, great work, keep writing! ~Lurid~ |
| sweets555 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abusegreat job. |
| PsychoCola 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseNot bad, but be wary of rhyming stressed syllables with unstressed syllables |