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Reviews For: Unrequited Feelings

XxXKristie marieXxX
2008-02-29
ch 1,
abuseThe last line is always the question that wants to be asked but hardly anyone does. Love the poem. I'm so glad its in my C2. Keep writing.


XKristie MarieX
Lurid Black
2008-01-11
ch 1,
abuseGreat poem, sweet structure of your rhymes, nicely written, great work, keep writing!
~Lurid~
sweets555
2007-12-08
ch 1,
abusegreat job.
PsychoCola
2007-12-07
ch 1,
abuseNot bad, but be wary of rhyming stressed syllables with unstressed syllables
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