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substitute angel 2008-03-04 ch 1,	abuseWow. This sparked my interest when I started reading it and it kept it through the entirety of the piece. You used colorful words which helped the poem come alive. I honestly really enjoyed this. Beautifully written. ~Blue Calico
Miss-India 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abuseVery moving! Great job. I know you will be able to conquer the eating disorder. A couple of suggestions: "It'll take some work girl but your ready and willing." You could put it as: "It'll take some work, girl. But you're ready and willing." Correct the "your" into "you're" in all other appropriate places also. "your hair thin now your eyes are sunken in" Can be written as: your hain are thin now, your eyes have sunken in And lastly, "Don't be sad girl 'cuase this is ana's voice you hear" (You can spot the spell error here)
PsychoCola 2007-12-07 ch 1,	abuseEating disorders are such a sad thing... this poem just made me wanna cry. I like this poem. It's verbally ironic without being mocking or derisive.