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diametric
2007-12-08
ch 1, 		I SHALL TEAR IT UP,
SMILE, LOVE
AS I PICK AWAY AT THE STITCHING THAT HOLDS THIS ALL TOGETHER.
I NEVER WANTED TO,
BUT THEY; PERCHED ON THEIR STILTS, POINT AND DARE
ME TO BREAK CUSTOM.

Good **.
Two lines.
Good **.
sweets555
2007-12-08
ch 1, 		i like it. very clean, to the point.
but good luck gettin in back.
sweets5
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