After reading this, first chapter, I must say that I'm quite glad with how this story is going.
The descriptions are sometimes unnecesarry dragged and there are some grammar mistakes that could be easily avoided (like 'it self' in stead of itself or 'in to' where it should be into)... now, I'm not the one for grammar, coz my English isn't perfect either, but the mistakes I've spotted can be fixed if you'd proof-read the chapter before submitting, which is my advice.
A thing that bothered me was that you constantly kept refering to the characters by their names: Blaze and 'Demon Hunter'. It gets tiring IMO and somewhat gives an impression that you yourself don't know much about them since you can't refer to them any, other way. I advice you look for some characteristics that you could use during describing their actions, for example 'Demon Hunter' could be replaced by redhead here and there.
Your style of writing your action scene resembles mine, so I'd be a hypocrite if I were to say I don't like it. Overall the fight way good, but I was lost at one point as to what occurred.
To sum up: I'm intrigued by the story and I believe it can go somewhere. I'll cut the reading short for now, but I'll be back in the future to read more.
Good luck with future chapters.
Take care.

It took me a while but I finally got caught up on this wonderful work of yours. It's definitely reeling me in. Your description is beautiful and actions well thought out. Grand job!

This is very good and well-written. I like the description that you use here. You definitely have a talent for this story and I hope that you continue it.

I'll definitely be back for the next chapter.

If you have the time I'd like it if you'd read some of my stuff sometime.