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| Sexy vampirechick 2008-04-10 ch 1,  | abuseI think in the the line "right wrongs" you meant write wrongs, or was it is right or wrong..I doubt it's the second one though,since the first one fits better. I like the metaphor you used in the last three lines.Really good!Nice poem!It was a great read. |