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| Natalie Page 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseThere's obviously some meaning here that I'm missing, but the way the words are put together and arranged is simple and effective. I really like the impromptu rhyme with rewind/unwind that doesn't follow up, because it makes you stop and go back to it to make sure you got it right. I also adore the metaphor in "rosette wreaths". |