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| Blimple 2008-03-25 ch 1,   | "In that place, nothing was there and yet everything felt as perfectly placed as a feng-shui handbook. Death was the way to live." This is really quite good - i like the cynicism. The middle paragraph about death is by far the best, it just completely works. Thanks for reviewing my poem - it was very kind of you. |
| GRAYTEXT 2008-02-20 ch 1, | Interesting view, "Death is sort of like love." The connotative contrast lends a lot to the story. Great job so far. I can't wait to read more. |