maybe there _is_ a tiny dash of justice left.

Huh...I'd really like to hear this...It'd be something rather interesting blaring out of a college dorm room.

Classic blues song. Not really much else to say. It's nicely done. Keep writing! :)

This has an interesting mixture of modernity and soulful blues ideals. Kind of Robert Johnson bluesy meets the current world. I like the consistency of the beat. Quite audible. Well written. MD:77.

It's very raw and blunt, I like it a lot. There seems to be something missing in the beginning, it seems rushed (personally). I think you might be missing a theme throughout, like the chorus isn't there, but that's just because I'm imagining it as a song. Either way, good job as usual. Keep on writing!

Dx

lol... I like this a lot... the ending is great.. and the way you formatted it... very bluesy