I like how it's compelling in its simplicity. Most people can probably relate to this in some way; the desperation to be paid any attention for any reason.

I'd suggest a period at the end of line four. It looks odd without it.

It is curious that the woman didn't stop calling after she got the wrong number the first time, but that is beside the point I suppose.

-Adrian, from the review marathon (link in my profile).

something about this is just... brilliant.

reminds me of joey comeau.