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| gulistanlik 2008-06-02 ch 1,  | abuseUh... I think Bryant was a bastard, he could've just told her that he wasn't interested in her in that sense. I think he's at fault too. Other than that, I'm glad Sophia got what she deserved, stupid **. =D gulistanlik |
| thoughtsofwisdom 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseTAKE THAT **! BOO-yah. this one made me smile |
| Ellieloo la Grimm 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was a cute story. I really likes the end! haha Sophia! nanana... |
| gabby 2008-04-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseokay, so cute! expand it please |
| phantom66 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abusewoaw! that was like the best one-shot I've ever read! keep up the auwsome work! :) |
| kIlL yOu FoR a KlOnDiKe BaR 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseAHH! funni! classic storry! but still good! i loved it! update soon!-chels |
| Anti-inflammatory 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseAh. Cute. I love it. Kudos |
| incandescente 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseAw, I like this story. It's not very saccharine sweet, just nice i thought. :) I felt that the latter part of the story was a little abrupt. After discovering Sophia had betrayed her, things went very fast. She went to confront them etc etc. There were some instances you wanted to write 'jealousy' but you wrote 'jealously'. Just thought I'd bring it to your notice. :) All the best in writing! |
| a.beautiful.breakdown. 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseawle ! suchacute story ! well done xD |
| Shelby 2008-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is such a good beginning, you must write more, tell us about all the dirty little things that Sophia and Cadd do to each other! |
| jessie x duh 2008-01-01 ch 1, anon. | abusehahahah! go cassidy. she rocks. love this consider making it a chapter story? |
| thecamerawoman 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseOh. I liked it. Admittedly, the summary really got me to read this story. It was really...*thinks for a word* intriguing. (wtf?) Anywho, this sounds really good. I hope you update soon. =] Gah. I can't believe Bryant. He goes from total hot dude who I wanna lick, to a dude whose face I wanna punch in. |
| the big crunch 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abusei realy love this. more or no more? urgh.. |
| exquisiteKOREAN 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. Sleek and just very nice. ;] |
| bookworm925 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseCool!! :) "Take that, **"... hahahah! ;) ~riE07 |