   tall 2009-08-22 . chapter 1Haha, too cute! A bit cliched but the cuteness completely wipes that out =) |
 Sarah Francise 2009-08-11 . chapter 1 I dont get why she took him back after he cheated on her i mean he didnt really but they kissed didnt they, and he wouldnt tell sophia to go away or not touch him |
| kristin.elise 2009-06-14 . chapter 1 Ok, That was freaking amazing. Exactly as someone could picture it truly happening in high school. |
 MaPluie 2009-06-11 . chapter 1This is really good. I hope you could make it a longer story. hehe. |
 HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC 2009-05-31 . chapter 1i LOVE it when just deserts are served.!.
great job.!. |
 I Murder on Impulse 2009-03-19 . chapter 1Aw...love this story!
xx |
 MetroxStation 2009-02-19 . chapter 1ah-mazing! i really like this story, the perfect guy, the secret relationship, the backstabing BFF, perfect! |
| Urfavefreek 2009-02-10 . chapter 1 The best oneshot ever written! I loved it! U r cool the way u stick to oneshots! I am over using exclmations! |
 Kisnie 2009-01-24 . chapter 1Go, Cassidy! xD |
 AloneAndSearchingx3 2008-12-25 . chapter 1I loved it accept the end. I think she should have broke up with him. He just seemed like he was lying. I don't like him haha. But other than that i liked it. And I definately think you should make it a story. |
 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2008-12-12 . chapter 1This was interesting...the way that Cass' friend told Cass that Sophia was just using her was a little insensitive though...and kind of unrealistic. But other than that, awesome job! |
 zomgdarling 2008-12-06 . chapter 1i seriously love this! :) |
 toffeecakesxox. 2008-08-27 . chapter 1A-D-O-R-A-B-L-E. I love it!! :D Sophia's evil. Anyways, adorable!
Strawberry xx |
 atreyu love 2008-08-06 . chapter 1i dont like bryant.
stupid excuse.
well, i couldnt say no,
that would be suspicious, my **.
she should have just dumped him. lol |
 Bittersweet Farwell 2008-08-06 . chapter 1Okay, hi. I'm going to make this short and sweet because I know if I don't, I'll write so much it coul be a novel. So, the reason I'm reviewing your story s because I liked the idea of this one shot, but I was wondering if I could make it into a full blown story. This would be my first fp story but not my first story. I had many stories on FanFiction, butsadly my ** sister "accidentaly" erased it. She wasn't to happy when I found out. Anyway I was to lazy to put all the stories back up so I guess I just stopped going to that site anymore. Okay, this is getting too long so I'm going to finish it up. I like your one shot and I want to write a full story based on it. If you could e-mail me back you answer that would be greatly appreciated! :)
Sincerely
~BF |
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