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2007-12-13
ch 1,
abusei liike this
repeating the line
he's not dead, he's just gone was
a really good idea and my favorite part of this poem was the
seventh stanza
smile for the sunshine
2007-12-08
ch 1,
abusebeautifully written. i loved it. truly.

the repetition of "he's not dead, he's just gone." worked lovely. i thought so, anyway.

a favorite. kudos. cheers to an amazing job.

(add to favorite story list && C2)
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