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| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2008-01-17 ch 1, | Wow. Very awesome idea for a metaphor, very disgusting reality... I liked how it was written short and with many halts of thought. ~the Stranger in the moonlight |
| Cecil13 2007-12-09 ch 1, | Its amazing. I really liked the bits in there when she was being herself, you know? the ones where she said she didn't like the life she lived. its really good. |
| CarnivalGirl346 2007-12-08 ch 1, | This sounds as if this is your life in the beginning but as you read on it seems so true about life in general or barbie dolls. |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-12-08 ch 1, | I love this. The ending especially. So piercing and intense. This was extremely well written and you've done an excellent job with this piece. I can relate, in a way. I think a lot of people can. Amazing job! Keep it up! |