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Reviews For: The Dollhouse Theory

the Stranger in the moonlig...
2008-01-17
ch 1,
Wow. Very awesome idea for a metaphor, very disgusting reality... I liked how it was written short and with many halts of thought.

~the Stranger in the moonlight
Cecil13
2007-12-09
ch 1,
Its amazing. I really liked the bits in there when she was being herself, you know? the ones where she said she didn't like the life she lived. its really good.
CarnivalGirl346
2007-12-08
ch 1,
This sounds as if this is your life in the beginning but as you read on it seems so true about life in general or barbie dolls.
xDancingintheRainx
2007-12-08
ch 1,
I love this. The ending especially. So piercing and intense. This was extremely well written and you've done an excellent job with this piece. I can relate, in a way. I think a lot of people can. Amazing job! Keep it up!
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