| Reviews for where only black cracked asphalt can glitter |
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A Scarlet Raven 12/15/07 . chapter 1beautiful...i know the feeling...far too well. it hurts. |
the face in the window 12/9/07 . chapter 1Another beautiful piece. Nice write. Rowan. |
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea 12/8/07 . chapter 1I liked this. I think that it was creative how you made a word skin and sin which fit perfectly in your one line. Although I have to say a couple of them worked but some to me didn't really. I liked you're use of it much better in this piece than some of your others though, lol. |
creepy kiss on tuesday 12/8/07 . chapter 1aw, this is lovely. |