|Reviews for where only black cracked asphalt can glitter|
| A Scarlet Raven 12/15/07 . chapter 1
beautiful...i know the feeling...far too well.
| the face in the window 12/9/07 . chapter 1
Another beautiful piece. Nice write.
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea 12/8/07 . chapter 1
I liked this. I think that it was creative how you made a word skin and sin which fit perfectly in your one line. Although I have to say a couple of them worked but some to me didn't really. I liked you're use of it much better in this piece than some of your others though, lol.
| creepy kiss on tuesday 12/8/07 . chapter 1
aw, this is lovely.