|Reviews for too bad napkins won't do it|
| bitterpaper 12/25/07 . chapter 1
I like the way the napkins cleaning up little messes just won't cut it for real messes. You can't just wipe things away and except other people whom you've hurt to pretend like it never happened.
Very nicely done.
| creepy kiss on tuesday 12/9/07 . chapter 1
aw, i like this. i could picture the imagery very well.
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea 12/8/07 . chapter 1
I liked this. Short but powerful and very well writen. Good job C.
| Faith Adeline 12/8/07 . chapter 1
very good. I love the meaning and metaphor of this. keep up the wonderful work.
| WholeHeart 12/8/07 . chapter 1
It's a good metaphor.