Your poem really struck me, because of how true it is to me as well. I love the way you've worded it, the structure of it, and I'm a sucker for good punctuation. Keep up the good work.

Amazing poem, I love it.

thge highest grade you can get is an A, you get an A- "that's great dear let's see if we can get it up to an A" they say in a montone voice and when you get that A you get about 5 secs worth of attention and then it's back to the struggle of being perfect. when life gives you lemons, make lemonade and then spit it out because life didn't any sugar with the lemons, you get what I'm saying?

This fits everything I've ever thought when I'm angry. People want me to be perfect. My parents, they want me to be perfect because they failed on my brother...

Dedicated to me...? Thank you, if my words have ever been of a little comfort to you then i am happy, you write poems of exeptional beauty. They hit the feelings i have perfect. I hope you continue writing. Wishing you everything good.
Fallen Angel

THANK YOU!

truth..yes the truth from my standpoint anywho

They say poetry is just words....bnut it's not. good poem...i dig. i totally do. it's going on favorites

I know! Its horrible! I find that if you go someplace with your friends and they are all in a different mood than you are they wont want to tolerate you or hang out with you. good poem, good point ;)

I know exactly what you mean. And it's wonderful that you can put it into words

pretty good!

wow that was a totally awesome poem. been there. feel that way. mann i can totally relate! keep it up babe

Oooo...very good! Me-sa likes!

yay very good