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TheBonelessOne 2008-02-08 . chapter 1
another great poem!
this just recently happened to me too and so i can really really really relate to this. it's too true,
keep writing, i love reading your poems!
*adds to fave author list*
TheBonelessOne~
.cupids.battlefield. 2008-01-05 . chapter 1
It was beautiful. Everybody has a friend, a secret and a dark past filled with betrayal - this is just yours. It was really just fantastic.
standing.in.the.wreckage 2007-12-09 . chapter 1
wow, that was really good. i can sence a lot of hurt here. I think you expressed your feelings nicely and the reader can really feel it. i really liked it, its sad but incredibly powerful (if that makes sence) great job and keep it up (hope tings get better for you)
Lilyre and Livvyg 2007-12-09 . chapter 1
This is really good, and I can really relate (as you already know from reading 'Betrayal of Friends'. It happens all the time, and trust me, it doesn't mean that something's wrong with you. It just happens. There was a quote that was something along the lines of "Friends are people who fill a big space in your life, even if only for a moment." I don't remember who said it or what the exact words were, but this poem reminded me of that. It was great, and may your pen never run out of ink!

~Livvyg
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