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Reviews For: One of THOSE days

TheBrokenWanderer
2005-07-13
ch 1,
everything you write/wrote is filled with originality and pure genius...

~TheBrokenWanderer~
Caitir
2003-08-07
ch 1,
I love it! It makes perfect sense in a completely ridiculous way... a great achievement.
scarred
2002-12-30
ch 1,
I think that I know what you mean by one of those days. When nothing seems right. I really love your writing, how you just say everything as it is. Good job.
vicci
2002-05-16
ch 1,
haha !!!!!!!!!!!!!! very shel silverstein-esque
Ragdoll
2001-05-21
ch 1,
hey this is GREAT! i love all the weirdness and contradiction and all that karazee stuff :) The best image you made was of the spinning coin forming a box...thats such an amzing idea. I love trippy poems!! :) the line "The crime maybe short but the punishment long" reminded me of my impending court case. d'oh! Oh yeh i dont wanna say this but i feel i should tell you for some reason (cos you help me).. i cut again. i musta gone like 3 weeks without.. oh well :(
Danielle
2001-05-13
ch 1,
*Claps loudly* That is such a GOOD poem. I know exactly what you meant when you read it.
The Youko no Miko
2001-04-17
ch 1,
I can identify with that! It sounds like geography class! Keep writing!
beth m
2001-04-15
ch 1,
This isn't funny but I still think it's brilliant! I love this and its one of the best poems I've read today.:)
MemoryNo1
2001-04-11
ch 1,
LOL. I like. you certainly have a way with words!! Nice job again, and good alliteration! its very effective!
Aurora Light
2001-04-06
ch 1,
I love it! Where do you get the insiration or these things?
Baby S -- Too lazy to sign ...
2001-04-06
ch 1,
I thought ya were gonna copy Limp Bizkit's song!!!
Lisa Cove
2001-04-06
ch 1,
~blinks~ I liked it. It was a very creative poem. I have never had a day quite like that, and I'm sorta glad too. Keep writing:)
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