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| TheBrokenWanderer 2005-07-13 ch 1, | everything you write/wrote is filled with originality and pure genius... ~TheBrokenWanderer~ |
| Caitir 2003-08-07 ch 1, | I love it! It makes perfect sense in a completely ridiculous way... a great achievement. |
| scarred 2002-12-30 ch 1, | I think that I know what you mean by one of those days. When nothing seems right. I really love your writing, how you just say everything as it is. Good job. |
| vicci 2002-05-16 ch 1, | haha !!!!!!!!!!!!!! very shel silverstein-esque |
| Ragdoll 2001-05-21 ch 1, | hey this is GREAT! i love all the weirdness and contradiction and all that karazee stuff :) The best image you made was of the spinning coin forming a box...thats such an amzing idea. I love trippy poems!! :) the line "The crime maybe short but the punishment long" reminded me of my impending court case. d'oh! Oh yeh i dont wanna say this but i feel i should tell you for some reason (cos you help me).. i cut again. i musta gone like 3 weeks without.. oh well :( |
| Danielle 2001-05-13 ch 1, | *Claps loudly* That is such a GOOD poem. I know exactly what you meant when you read it. |
| The Youko no Miko 2001-04-17 ch 1, | I can identify with that! It sounds like geography class! Keep writing! |
| beth m 2001-04-15 ch 1, | This isn't funny but I still think it's brilliant! I love this and its one of the best poems I've read today.:) |
| MemoryNo1 2001-04-11 ch 1, | LOL. I like. you certainly have a way with words!! Nice job again, and good alliteration! its very effective! |
| Aurora Light 2001-04-06 ch 1, | I love it! Where do you get the insiration or these things? |
| Baby S -- Too lazy to sign ... 2001-04-06 ch 1, | I thought ya were gonna copy Limp Bizkit's song!!! |
| Lisa Cove 2001-04-06 ch 1, | ~blinks~ I liked it. It was a very creative poem. I have never had a day quite like that, and I'm sorta glad too. Keep writing:) |