Reviews for Decision Time, Peanut

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daretobe-dIfFeRnT 2008-08-25 ch 1,	abusethis was so great, i loved it! in addition to writing great stories, you write one hell of a one-shot^_^
Jenc11 2008-08-16 ch 1,	abuseOh wow. Those situations are really so hard to go through... Definitely different from your usual stories, but still amazing. :)
GoldenStarryNight 2008-08-13 ch 1,	abuseangsty! but i like it. hehe. great job
Sayacinari 2008-07-31 ch 1,	abusethis one-shot brought me many different emotions at the same time. at times, i didn't know who i should be rooting for, or if i was certain that i agree with evie's choice or not. but being said, i say that this is pretty realistically written. it's a great read and i can definately see this not as a one-shot, but i do like how it is.
xoyingying 2008-06-20 ch 1,	abuseWOW THAT WAS SO GOOD!
Klianie Janiko 2008-06-18 ch 1,	abuseThis is such a chick flick sorta thing. I can't imagine myself say things like that. But Brother Mac must be some real big hot guy! In some ways I enjoyed reading it because the emotions are so raw. In others, it was kinda cheesy.
rjdickert 2008-06-18 ch 1,	abuseWOW!! THAT WAS PHENOMENAL! You are without a doubt, my favorite author on fictionpress. I absolutely love how the characters become so real, and you were able to make them real, even thought it was only a one-shot. Please write more! I will be first in line to read your completed works! (I can't stand to read incomplete stories, I'm impatient and get all anxious when the story is not complete.) :) ~Rachel
Evolet Blue 2008-05-24 ch 1,	abuseToo awesome for words, this story rocks! love&peace
EasilyDamaged 2008-05-07 ch 1,	abuseOh wow, I love it! :) It's awesome. XD
Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-04-29 ch 1,	abuseI love this too :D
found.eventually 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseOh, what the hell. I feel so bad for Davey! But this was good. I think you achieved whatever you were supposed to achieve. Hell, it was amazingly intense. Loved it. :)
Le Meg 2008-03-25 ch 1,	abuseFirst thing first... good story. I like it. It's well written, enough details, everything is set up nicely and it definitely works. The sexual tension between Evie and Mac is fabulous - you can totally feel it and any kind of attraction that strong is always something you want to root for. I think it's realistic, as well, because "there's someone else" seems like one of the biggest reasons for break-ups. But this is where I begin to have problems, too... poor friggin' Davey. Dumped on his birthday for his older brother. Pretty ** timing, and it's what makes me kind of dislike both Evie and Mac. But instead of psychoanalyzing the hell out of the characters I'll just let it go and say yay for fiction! If you want to hear the whole of it, message me and I'll give you my full, totally biased opinion. But otherwise, seriously, it's a great piece. Kudos. =]
Norel 2008-03-11 ch 1,	abuseThat was brilliant. This might seem random, but the part where you said how Davey "wore the shoes I’d got him for his birthday" absolutely broke my heart for him. It was his birthday, he was wearing the shoes she'd gotten him...and then she dumped him. I felt horrible for him. But still, the ending if this story was just right because it would have been worse for her to with Darvey just cause she didn't want to hurt him.
Lulu Jones 2008-03-09 ch 1,	abuseGez and on his birthday too, but what can you do?
maskedmischief 2008-02-18 ch 1,	abuseI loved this i normally hate oneshots because they are so short and need more but you did perfectly on this one. on a side note even though I know vocera cant read this it may wreck thier family but i doubt that wouldve happened things like girls cause problems but family is more.

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