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| WritesWithPoisonInkAndBlood 2008-06-21 ch 1,  | abuseThis is incredible, good job hun x |
| Air Rey 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abusestunning! it's very brief but pretty human. i like how you used very brief lines. you got your message across with such brevity and simplicity. hope to read more of you. |
| tearing hands 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseI love the switch to italics in "burns me. like Helena said. melting." and the ending is so perfect. Could you explain the title to me? Maybe I just missed something, but I don't really understand the reasoning behind it, or why the first two letters are capitalized. |
| a silenced revolution 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseI love how intriguing this is, how the ending leaves a mystery. Really nice work. |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseI like the formatting a lot.. and the ending is especially beautiful |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseThe meaning is hard to grasp the first time you read it, but after I read it multiple times I seemed to understand it better. The imagery is beautiful and really intense. Very well done. I like the ending especially. |