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| wrapped-in-porcelain 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abusei've been trying to capture scenes relating to this particular lifestyle for a while, and i haven't been able to do it as nicely as you have right here. the last lines are my favorite. |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is my favorite by far. d:) I love the imagery that this puts in my head as I read it. |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseyeah i understand this, and it's kinda nice but you have been using the analogy of fire for awhile and this topic so i guess i could like it better if it had been more spread out. kinda the way you felt about my alcohol poems. good but becoming cliché to yourself if that makes any sense. |