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| smile for the sunshine 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseit's interesting. i think the last line was different from what i was expecting. but i agree with your summary. fake is not cool. and suicide seems to be in...interesting piece. nice work. keep writing. = ) |
| shadows of a trackless sea 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abusek umm.. Well it seemed good until the last lines. You're basically telling people to go die, not very good. But I do think that you write well. I know what you mean about not liking fake people, but at the same time you must remember that I life is a life and once lost can not be replaced. |