Reviews for Under the Influence

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Euphorialie 2008-04-18 ch 8,	abuseA very deep question...would you help or not? I like that the guy was truthful, cause most people wouldn't help, but they would lie and say they would. Loved it, once again. Another important ethical question, another wonderfully unconcealed observation. :)
RandomActs 2008-04-14 ch 7,	abuseThese are all exciting little peeks through dirty windows.You look in and you know you shouldn't be THAT interested but you squint anyway to get a better faster look!
Euphorialie 2008-04-09 ch 7,	abuseYay! Someone else who hates on television! I love this whole story, it's so wonderful in a twisted sort of way. Even such a short chapter as this has such a huge impact. Amazing. And ack, I know what you mean about standardized tests. We're doing MAP right now, which sucks. I sympathize with you greatly. :) Anyways, great job!
Hitori-San-13 2008-04-02 ch 6,	abuseWow I really like this story. Maybe it's because you finally tell the truth and you don't sugar-coat it.
Euphorialie 2008-03-30 ch 6,	abuseWow. Wow. Just...wow. This chapter was so DEEP. You critisized our mindless economy and worthlessness in one go...and for that I commend you. The last part was just perfect and so true...actually the whole thing was true. I'm just stunned. Making fun of "progress" is one of my favorite things to do so when I read this I was just sort of shocked into silence at its perfection. So, wonderful job. I can't think of words to explain how amazing this was, so just know that it was flawless.
Dellarose 2008-03-29 ch 6,	abuseI will give you ten years of servitude if you don't disappear ever again! ^_^ Tehehe, we missed you.
Euphorialie 2008-03-29 ch 5,	abuseYay, I'm caught up! But now there's no more to read at this point...sadness. Anyways, I think this was my favorite chapter so far, cause the little facts were really interesting and still very sarcastic because they aren't important. It's like, 'Hey, fill your brain with this even though it's unnecessary.' Loved it basically. Can't wait for more!
Euphorialie 2008-03-29 ch 4,	abuseHa, this one made me laugh at the end. I love the detail in it with the mailbox and the imaginary life. Great job, once again. You basically win at life. Onward!
Euphorialie 2008-03-29 ch 3,	abuseOoh, I loved this chapter. Especially the line, "You're easier to swallow, now" for some reason. Very cool. Hating on the educational system is fun, that's why this one was even more awesome than usual. Anyways, on to the next chapter! P.S. Thanks for the reviews by the way, I'm glad you liked mine. :)
Euphorialie 2008-03-28 ch 2,	abuseI love this. Very Palahnuik, which I noticed you like, and I love too. It's really different and disjointed, but I liked that about it, cause it's unique. The time jump was nice, and the fact that a distinct plot hasn't really come out yet is keeping me guessing. It reminds me a lot of something I'm writing right now, which makes me enjoy it even more. So basically wonderful job.
Dice Darwin 2008-01-19 ch 5,	abuseThis is so good. I don’t even know what to say. I just had to review it, to let you know another person appreciates it. Good luck with your writing.
Dellarose 2007-12-21 ch 5,	abuseNow, what I'm about to say is completely wrong considering this girl killed two people and hurt little kids, but for some reason, this makes me think of Brenda Ann Spencer. In case you don't know her (she's not very important or anything) she was a girl who started shooting people at a school and, when asked why she did it, said "I don't like Mondays." The Mondays line is what reminds me of this story. Oh, I'm looking at her wikipage, and turns out she was "under the influence" when she did it. Coincidence? (Actual, non-sarcastic question; I'm not /trying/ to link you with a psychotic killer.) So, yes I love this story! Update update update! (And I will love you for eternity).
Dellarose 2007-12-21 ch 4,	abuseWorking-class, high school girl fiction. Sarcastic, bitter working-class, high school girl fiction. This is the vibe I am gathering. We should form a working-class, bitter high school girl guild. Then we could go on strike! Hoorah for strike!
Dellarose 2007-12-21 ch 3,	abuse"The water fountain watches with a stoic, unwavering face." OH GOD. NOW THAT WAS A GOOD LINE. I'M WRITING IN CAPITALS TO PROVE EMPHASIS. I LOVE THEE!
Dellarose 2007-12-21 ch 2,	abuseYee! Leinnansidhe is right! Very Chuck Palahniuk. But not in a "ooh, I ripped of Chuck! Tehehe!" No, more like "I am awesome, much like Chuck Palahniuk, but I am not him because I am too busy being Aleksy Lorraine, also super awesome." :) You get what I mean. I love it.

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