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| Bloodfeeder94 2008-05-25 ch 1,  | abusethatsREALLY good! I liked the last line. |
| girl-in-america 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abuseA little hard to understand at times, but I really enjoyed it. |
| HGiel 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseThis was a wonderful story. I enjoyed it a lot. I with there was more stuff like this on FP, thanks for publishing it. |
| Mademoiselle Rouge 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseThat's really good. |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2007-12-26 ch 1, | abusethat was good. and i think that ur the first guy i've seen here. and your good!! i like gay stories, so i'm probably going read all of yours. really good story! |
| nonaccount 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseInteresting oneshot. I like the teeter-totter of the protagonist's emotions. |
| A.F Lanley 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseVery good, very powerful piece. |