damn.
reading this, you can FEEL that nasty word just boil up in your blood and catch your bones on fire.

In-**-credible.

Srsly.

hihi, I kinda find this fic funnyXD
the 'I hate you' parts *laugh*
but it is sweet...that it actually isn't hate but love...I love the way you write the persons feelings
anyways thank you again

aahw soo sweetXD omg so sweetxD I'm glad I read this one after 'Everyday' I love it! ah I just love it=D

I quite liked this. I love little oneshots that have powerful last lines, and I've read many that had ** last lines, but your last line belies the whole messeage of the thing, so yeah!

I thought it was nice :D.

I adore this ^_^ there's such a desperation to his words, I can feel the frantic rush of thoughts as he tries to convince himself that he hates the other and it's wonderful.

You place a lot of feeling behind your words and that's admirable. Well done.

thatsREALLY good! I liked the last line.

A little hard to understand at times, but I really enjoyed it.

This was a wonderful story. I enjoyed it a lot. I with there was more stuff like this on FP, thanks for publishing it.

That's really good.

that was good. and i think that ur the first guy i've seen here. and your good!! i like gay stories, so i'm probably going read all of yours. really good story!

Interesting oneshot. I like the teeter-totter of the protagonist's emotions.

Very good, very powerful piece.