Incredible story!
I love the way it was written and posted, especially with the jumbled chapters!
The only bad thing: it had to end

-- Kashi

I have to admit, although the story was better than good I couldn't fully understand it. The content in the chapters seemed to skip around, not being in the right order. I know this was probably intended, and I'm sorry it didn't make more sense because I really loved each chapter. -c.m.

I've decided to do a fanart, because this fanfiction is just that kick-**. I'll send the link to you once I upload it onto Deviantart, okay?

This was just... so... sigh.

Brilliant. (bright, piercing, resonating)

Beautiful. (elegant, sweet, compelling)

Thanks for writing.

you know, honey, sometimes I really hate you. I do. because you write something absolutely, positively brilliant like this, and you make everyone else's writing feel inferior--you know, I was writing a story of my own when I read this, and I actually almost considered deleting everything on the page because it wasn't up to par with what YOU wrote.

Your writing breaks my heart; I can't even describe how much I love it. *bows*

simply amazing. i love this(:

this is really good, i'm surprised there aren't many reveiws. it made me think, and that's a good thing for a story. beautifuly written.

*GLOMPS* REN! I didn't know you had a fictionpress account too.
...nice story. I can see your writing style all over it...and I will have to read the rest soon.
...
maybe after I can escape my science textbook (WHY MUST EXAMS EXIST?? WHY??)

REN!
Buaha, I love how you ended this chapter. Every part of it was freaking brilliant.

I feel so cool doing this from the school's computer.

I love your writing style. Everything you describe is...well, really well describe, you're good at making twists in the plot, and--ugh, you're just amazing at writing! (I'm surprised you only have 4, well 5 including this one, reviews, because this is such a good fic!) I was sorta surprised that you made Matt the terrorist (or made him related to the terrorist). Faving Faving Faving XD

I didn't get to tell you exactly how much I loved this on LJ so I'll do it now.

"Time passes, maybe years or seconds, but in the end…

Three people entered the room.

Two came back out."

This part was just gorgeous and chilling, and perfect.
It sent shivers down my spine.

Lmao. So freaking typical.

REN!
YOU MADE ME HYPER BECAUSE ALL OF YOUR LENAMATT DRABBLES ARE IN ONE PLACE AND OMGOMGOMG.
:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
(And yeah I'm jilly4719 :d)

I loved that last line (made me fangirl). I'll start reading the other oneshots when I get the time! XD