this is such a deep and engaging piece! you can really feel the emotion flowing from every word and into you as you read it.

you really have a talent ash

xx

oh. i love it. so, emotional. very nice. my favorite lines: "she is all you see/you don't see me." perfect ending. very nice.

I do like this one quite a bit. The pain is evident and clearly felt by the reader. Sticks in my mind too. I'll have this stuck in my head for a few days, I should think.

Don't do it.

You promised me you wouldn't.

I haven't.

Nothing I can say will stop you.

Does it help?

Do you like seeing them?

The pretty patterns?

I know it makes you feel better.

I know from experience.

But a friend of mine told me to be strong.

Don't think that friend of mine gives a sh*t what i say anymore.

But that friend means a lot to me.

And I don't want to lose her over a boy.

It's stupid.

That girl gave me so many memories.

I need that girl...

And there's my rant to ur rant.

Read "Sweetie".

xoxx

I am now going to cyberhug you. *cyberhug*

Sorry that just felt appropriate.

I really do hope that vent helped...

Sounds like a lot of shit is gathering in your life.

I hear fire gets rid of shit. Anyone got a flamethrower?

Hehe.

It was beautiful and I could understand it don't worry.

KEEP GOING!

I shall be at the other end of the world on my computer, ready to review your rants ]

Yes, I'm oh so slightly hyper.

I don't get how but still-I just woke up...I've had no sugar...