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| wabam 2008-08-22 ch 15,  | abuseThis was all in all an amazing story. I love how it turned out, and I am so happy that Autumn finally gets James. ((I was kind of hoping ofr that all along)) Great ending with the family picture. It ties everything together in a loving way, proving that everything really is going to be okay with the families. Great work. I can't wait to read some other stories that you are surley going to make fantastic. |
| andee lee 2008-08-08 ch 15, | abuseSo I'm kind of sad she didn't end up with Andrew, but I GUESS james will do... haha I really enjoyed that. It moved kind of fast, but at the same time, the story was really thought through and put together well. Great job! -Andee |
| gulistanlik 2008-08-03 ch 15, | abuseWe never did get to find out a couple things. First, why the hell Andrew slept with her, twice. Second, what the gift was, the one he was going to give Autumn the morning before he left for uni. Wonderful story this although it feels kind of sad because I was rooting for Autumn and Andy all the way. But James was such a kind and wonderful person! Wow! He really is good with kids. The whole family fiasco at the end, it's an interesting arrangement and I doubt that families in such situations can get along that well in real life. So well done on bringing at least some sort of hope. =D Keep up the good work! gulistanlik |
| gulistanlik 2008-08-03 ch 11, | abuseIf the idiot girl would've just told him that time when she phoned him straight after his visit to her. Sighs. |
| gulistanlik 2008-08-03 ch 7, | abuseHow stupid is she? I mean hello! It was obvious by his tone on the phone etc. that he actually wanted something to do with her! Argh! And he's a bastard! You do not do that to a friend and leave her hanging and if you want more than friendship, you obviously don't mention another cute girl the next day after you've slept with another! I seriously want to hit Andrew. Big time. Moving on! gulistanlik |
| ukranianmira 2008-07-16 ch 15, | abusei wanted andrew and her to together |
| cue.dramatic.gasp. 2008-07-02 ch 15, | abuseI liked it. At first I was kind of upset because I assumed that she was going to end up with Andrew. It was the cliched ending and I really didn't want that, but thought that would make sense. Then James entered the picture and absolutely adored the way they met, and I thought James was a much better match. I really liked the ending and thought everything worked out perfectly, THOUGH there were SO many kids it was hard to keep count. Loved it, though. All in all, a very nice story. |
| Smiling Serenade 2008-06-10 ch 15, | abuseAw! Very cute story. Totally unexpected and creative. Couldn't stop reading it. (: |
| outsidersgirl 2008-06-09 ch 1, | abusethis is good |
| righthere431 2008-06-01 ch 15, | abuseaw this story is so adorable |
| righthere431 2008-06-01 ch 14, | abuseaw =] they finally made up |
| righthere431 2008-06-01 ch 13, | abuseha! i bet james only brought her in to make her jealous =] and im really glad that andrew is gonna be a real father =] |
| righthere431 2008-06-01 ch 12, | abuseso is she gonna be with james now? =] |
| righthere431 2008-06-01 ch 11, | abuseat least the kids know who their dad is now =] |
| righthere431 2008-06-01 ch 10, | abuselol i see they finally see each other, but who is she gonna fall in love with, andrew or james? arghh |