i know it says complete but i think if you continued it, it would turn out really good... plus i wanna see how their relationship goes.3.

Oh my god... THAT WAS SO SWEET! I love this, it's cute!

Am I a sick fuck for liking this story?

I absolutely love this fic! There were so many adorable moments and it was just so great!

I really liked this, made me laugh. The ending was a bit corny though, and some parts didn't make sense, such as when Matt was talking about Danny being little, but overall you did amazing. :D.

This IS NOT horrible written. You're being nominated for the Sweet Revolution Awards.

aw cute

I.. really liked it. D: I always like incest/yaoi though, if the pairing is good enough. And this is definitely good enough.

aw, damn. your V V good (:

same age as me, but i cant write, wah _

this story is fit. i'd like to take it out for dinner.

Hm. K, FIRSTLY, pick ONE tense and stick to it. (Keep in mind that present is the hardest to write.) SECONDLY, well. I'm not a fan of incest, and I never will be. This was pretty decent, though, but I think it could be a lot better with some revising and a beta. THIRDLY, Danny has moments where he feels like a girl. I mean, the beginning? It felt strangely feminine. Also, "curves"? Lolwhut? Care to explain how that works? FOURTH, the ending feels rushed. The whole "omg im so sick!1" feels like it's been added as a last-minute detail for angst-value, and it doesn't work. And did I say that the ending feels rushed? Rushing kills, babe. Really, it does. FIFHT, I don't get the feeling that there is - or has been, ever - any feelings of any kind between Alex the Girlfriend and Danny. It's like she's just there because you need there to be a girlfriend - it's like Danny's dating a cardboard cutout that yells at him. FINALLY, this is not bad, as such, it's just unpolished and a bit rushed. BASICALLY, revise, rewrite, and get yourself a beta. Kthx, and a happy Christmas to you. :)

aww, that was very cute :D Keep it up!

Amazingly good...great work!

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Oh wow... is this a one shot?

It's not horribly written! It's written very well. :]

Loved the story itself too [I seem to be a sucker for uncle/newphew stories xD], shame it was only a one-shot. :[

Oh wow, this was so good!

I think it could of been a little longer,

but it was cute and soft.

I hope you write more one shots about this couple!