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| petitfleur 2008-05-03 ch 9,  | abusegood chapter- I really like some of your details, like katy's dad's date looking at her "as if [she] was an inexpensive piece of furniture" and the hilarious line, "musn't judge on appearances." sounds like terry is a huge jerk. keep writing! |
| awaiting.rain 2008-04-27 ch 9, | abusehe didnt even call her? way to be jackass. |
| fsdfg 2008-04-27 ch 9, anon. | abuseep... where? |
| IsabellaLove 2008-04-27 ch 9, | abuseThis chapter was a little confusing but still really good! I like how the dad never mentioned he had a daughter I dont know it added a nice 'touch' of some sort. |
| FallenDreams03395 2008-04-27 ch 9, | abuseI know what you mean. There are thoes times where I either listen to a couple song or listen to my friends talk about their boyfriends and it makes me think, "I want a boyfriend!" but it'll take a while for me to get one since I'm extremely pickey though for me looks don't matter that much it's usually the way they treat me that matter... anyways...lol...I love your style of writing and this story has a serious message that people need to read...love it!=D Thanks for updating! O and my friends tell me that too! They're always telling me that I'm too cheerful and nice...o well... |
| petitfleur 2008-04-19 ch 8, | abuseTerry seemed so sweet... but I feel like she was pressured too, or she definitely doesn't feel the way she expected she would. I like this story a lot and I look forward to your updates. |
| awaiting.rain 2008-04-17 ch 8, | abusei kinda feel like she got taken advantage of. i cant believe you only have like 15 reviews. update soon. |
| awaiting.rain 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseupdate soon! |
| TragedyinComedy 2008-02-10 ch 7, | abuseCannibal casserole? ok im realy liking this story. Update soon |
| FallenDreams03395 2008-01-23 ch 7, | abuseWow! This is getting extremely good, but she shouldn't have gave in. oh guess I have to see what happens. Thanks for updating! :-D |
| FallenDreams03395 2008-01-08 ch 6, | abuseThis is awesome! I can't wait to see what will happen. |
| Into the Roses 2008-01-07 ch 3, | abuseL.O.V.E. Have to go now, but will read the rest of the chapters soon! |
| TragedyinComedy 2007-12-16 ch 5, | abuseupdate soon please |
| petitfleur 2007-12-14 ch 5, | abusecute and hilarious, especially the last line about Auntie Jane from Australia. Some parts are really cliche but I think you know that and it's your intention. keep up the good work. |
| Kyrina 2007-12-14 ch 5, | abuseoh em gee that is so cool!! lolz please update REALLY soon! |