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| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2008-01-31 ch 1,  | abuse*tears up*... Wow, thats awful... Completely heartwrenching tear-jerking tragic... ~the Stranger in the moonlight |
| Kirby Tails 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abuseScary as **. |
| DiaRose 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseIt's a great idea, but the words are FAR too simple. It's a deep subject, make it sound that way. Use pretty words. Love, ~Dia |
| painted.music 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abusekonnichi wa Hm. I didn't love it, but there was a line that I thought was absolutely brilliant. Sheer genius: "She said that you’re in a better place / But she still hates me for putting you there" -- LOVED IT! I'd go into more detail, but the letters that pop up as I type are making my headache worse, LoL. Wow, I'm pathetic, huh? Zaijen -Shan- |