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| Detox 2007-12-15 ch 1, | Nicely written. Even though it's December, I haven't read any christmas stories on here yet...this is a first actually. I loved the dialogue, it was raw and very believable. The descriptions were very to-the-point...**-eating grin, I've seen that many times in person, nicely done. Good job. |
| rawr.yeah 2007-12-10 ch 1, | That was written quite well, I really enjoyed it. I shows that even when you're at the bottom, there's always a chance to get back to the top. |