it's good but maybe you should write in english and not like texting stuff?

Seriously, I love the spelling and I think that you're BSing us when you say it's accidental. But the poem was AMAZING. LOved it.

Your poems are pretty good, I can understand where you're going with a lot of these, because I've been in a situation similar towards many of them. My only problem is that I have trouble reading most of them, because they are all spelt really weirdly, no offense. The way that they are spelt, makes me have to go back and read them over again, just to figure out what some of the words are. Other than that you've got plenty of talent in writing, and I think you should continue, the only thing I believe you should really start working on is your spelling.

Very short, yet interesting. It's very good, but i think it would be better if you would write it normally. You know, Instead of the AIM letters. But that's just my opinion. Do what you want and love how you do it.

Two things. You really need a goddamned beta & you can write. Your writing would much improve if I didn't have to read it over and over because I prefer normal spelling to invented. But otherwise, it's cool.

-Biohazard

This is probably the greatest poem ever written, particularly the line, "With teh slyt of a blade on transparint skin/ That sheltars the vilest hatrid."

ew ur ex soundz lyk such a butthead, i hope he getz siphyllis n his dick falls of