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| Bingster 2008-02-16 ch 1,  | abuseI thought this was very well written, and interesting! But I need to read more before I can give a decent critique. |
| The Melody of a Broken Hear... 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseDamn man, stop with all of these new stories and work on the one that's further ahead! (Don’t say anything about me because I don't have a 14 chapter story in progress). This was an okay chapter and not one of your best because I spotted a lot errors and I know you could do better. C'mon Denzel, what happened to that level of writing and the smooth flow from Reign that I read and love so much? And I am still puzzled about the term ‘Organisation’ and was wondering if you met ‘Organization’ but that’s my curiosity. I am still amazed on how many characters you throw into a chapter and saw at least six distinctive characters; with one exceptional character that might not live to see the end of the next chapter. Anyways, I’ll continue reading all of your stories and drop a review once I get the time. You are my best friend and a great fellow writer. Take care. Also… I got an opening for you in my group Versus Infinity and was wondering if you want to join. It’s a guarantee spot as the 3rd In Command. Think that through because being Versus Infinity is a commitment and a family of fellow dreamers. Think it through. Take care friend. Versus Infinity |