|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Lily Llynn 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseCute and perfectly adorably fluffy. I love it, and I'm so glad woodstock1969 added this to the c2! (: |
| drpepper...tu me sabes... 2007-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abusen i c e of course i would like to know who these people are (if you modeled them after actual people). you know me...cheesy whenever you bring up...this...topic...and this story is cheesy, but what romance story isn't? i definitely liked the imagery that your diction set in my brain. It was quite vivid. write another story. maybe a story set at that program thing in your story. You called it, 'Adventure'? k e e p w r i t i n g your creativity is cok. aiight, i think this review is decent enough, eh? nice story btw. -C G ^you should know who this is by now. um...hint...i always say, "CALL HIM" |