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| EclipseIllusion 2008-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseOverall, I'd say it was okay. You had punctuation problems, but the subject seemed orignal, which is good. |
| shadows of a trackless sea 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseNice rym scheme, it really flowed. It's so nice to hear that you're over him, I guess that guys just haven'tlearned, we really don't like playing games (at least not wit the heart,lol.) Very nicely done. ~S.S. |