I liked the...mystic way you wrote this, and how you let the verses be so short! I liked your setup and the length of the poem! All in all, great job! Keep at it!
The Reverse Edge Blade

Wow. I love the repetition cos it's not cheesy. This poem captures feelings I've had (though not at a rave exactly!).

i love this. it's the great thing about dancing, it takes a lot of emotions out of you and lets you look at them. and already ive lost myself. sorry. lovely poem.