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simpleplan13 2007-12-10 . chapter 1
what you think of me your... you're
oh how much i wnat to...want
your rejecting me...you're

interesting... I like it.. at the beginning i thought it was like someone who just never noticed you, but by the end im thinking its more like the silent treatment.. nice job.. the only thing is some of the lines end midsentence which seemed a bit choppy to me
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