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Reviews For: Magic Dance
Da Vinci at Work 2008-01-22 . chapter 1
Magic.
me 2007-12-22 . chapter 1
Very nice perspective and I like the orginality of the imaginary friend creating the fantasy world.

very nice.

-me
Unbeknownst 2007-12-09 . chapter 1
Very nice. It's not perfect--there are a few spots that could be worded better--but it really is lovely. :)
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