|Reviews for Make Me Bleed|
| gg. lass 5/24/08 . chapter 1
i've had similar experiences.
nice job and imagery...i could really taste the emotion.
yours until the wind changes,
| A Distant Planet 1/25/08 . chapter 1
I completely adore this. I know you said you're not happy with the ending, but I love it. It ends on the perfect tone, great job!
| Kissing Concrete 1/20/08 . chapter 1
AH! that is so creepy! but it was really good, and i could totally COMPLETELY picture everything about this: where it is, who the narrator is, the guy, everyone else in the bar- it is in a bar right? that has pool tables, and she is kinda trying to seduce him even though she hates his guts. The scariest part was "hitpinchstabbitepunchbruise me"- like she is waiting for it, and almost wants it, so everything will be like it has always been. oh, and i though you should know: "instead of letting my die so agonizingly slow from within," shouldn't it be "instead of letting me die so agonizingly slow from within?"
| Tequila 12/27/07 . chapter 1
Hey, this was great. I love the imagery and atmosphere this creates (very hot, steamy, sexy XD). I don't know what you're talking about with the ending either, I really like it.
| LauraZombie888 12/10/07 . chapter 1
i really like your poem
is it based aon a true story?
there were some spelling errors but i loved how descriptive you were
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