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I.O.K.O 2007-12-10 . chapter 1
If we took out all those who wasted space we would have an abundant amount of leftover food (abundant like your comma uses) to live off of. I'm not critiquing your work to be cynical. Just making an example. I know I use more than my fair share of commas. All of my english papers have comma splice written everywhere. Since I'm done with that rant, I'm glad you see things similar to the way I do.
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