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| dollface and her cancer 2008-05-21 ch 1,  | abuseyou never find them when i need you. christ. ain't that the way it goes. yesyesyes. |
| generically beautiful 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseThe third stanza made me shiver a little. However, I don't see the need for that last line. -Christine |
| N- 2008-02-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseintense. & even more than beautiful. i adore the way you write. |
| relapse into change 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abusedamn it, i ** loved this. your poetry is incredible and theres so much imagery to it. the third stanza..favorite, but the whole thing is just beautiful beyond belif. |
| wishing.on.echoes 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseFourth line, first word; should read too instead of 'to'. |