 Arre 2009-10-12 . chapter 1Thats a little bit tragic.
I love the axiom at the end. Its closes it well. |
 dollface and her cancer 2008-05-21 . chapter 1you never find them when i need you. christ. ain't that the way it goes. yesyesyes. |
 generically beautiful 2008-03-29 . chapter 1The third stanza made me shiver a little. However, I don't see the need for that last line.
-Christine |
 N- 2008-02-12 . chapter 1 intense.
& even more than beautiful.
i adore the way you write. |
 relapse into change 2008-02-03 . chapter 1damn it, i ** loved this.
your poetry is incredible and theres so much
imagery to it. the third stanza..favorite,
but the whole thing is just beautiful beyond
belif. |
 wishing.on.echoes 2007-12-10 . chapter 1Fourth line, first word; should read too instead of 'to'. |