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generically beautiful 2007-12-10 . chapter 1
It's a great poem - trust me, I can relate - but it isn't a haiku. Just switch categories, and you'll be just fine.
Honey Nut Loop and m-j 2007-12-10 . chapter 1
Lol. Good. I can't say i'm a cofee fan myself. I'll stick with hot chocolate.

Anyway, as i said, good poem, but possbily not a haiku.

Traditional haiku's are three lines with the syllable pattern 5, 7, 5.
Princess-anna57 2007-12-10 . chapter 1
:) Well described. Why is the category haiku, btw? :P Well done. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^
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